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Q&A Slow openings: What is it about this Neil Gaiman opening that pulls the reader in?

I think it's three things. First, the accessible writing style, with its informal language that matches how regular people think and talk, is helpful but not sufficient. Second, the character's a...

posted 12y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T02:14:23Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/5160
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T02:14:23Z (over 4 years ago)
I think it's three things. First, the accessible writing style, with its informal language that matches how regular people think and talk, is helpful but not sufficient. Second, the character's acceptance of the situation, which he appears to have accepted from the beginning, is unusual; we expect convicts to be hardened, angry people, and this is not that at all. Third, and probably related to the previous, is that we don't expect a criminal (he never protests his innocence here) to be a sympathetic character, yet this one seems to be.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2012-03-05T19:10:41Z (about 12 years ago)
Original score: 11