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First of all, you have a tense disagreement: "we had undergone" is past, so you need "confused" and "made." A few variants: ...made us re-experience Descartes's proclamation: "I think, therefor...
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First of all, you have a tense disagreement: "we had undergone" is past, so you need "confused" and "made." A few variants: - ...made us re-experience Descartes's proclamation: "I think, therefore I am." - ...made us re-experience Descartes's proclamation: _Cogito, ergo sum._ We thought, therefore we were. - ...made us cling to Descartes to assure ourselves that we were indeed real: "I think, therefore I am."
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2012-04-08T11:58:13Z (over 12 years ago)
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