Communities

Writing
Writing
Codidact Meta
Codidact Meta
The Great Outdoors
The Great Outdoors
Photography & Video
Photography & Video
Scientific Speculation
Scientific Speculation
Cooking
Cooking
Electrical Engineering
Electrical Engineering
Judaism
Judaism
Languages & Linguistics
Languages & Linguistics
Software Development
Software Development
Mathematics
Mathematics
Christianity
Christianity
Code Golf
Code Golf
Music
Music
Physics
Physics
Linux Systems
Linux Systems
Power Users
Power Users
Tabletop RPGs
Tabletop RPGs
Community Proposals
Community Proposals
tag:snake search within a tag
answers:0 unanswered questions
user:xxxx search by author id
score:0.5 posts with 0.5+ score
"snake oil" exact phrase
votes:4 posts with 4+ votes
created:<1w created < 1 week ago
post_type:xxxx type of post
Search help
Notifications
Mark all as read See all your notifications »
Q&A

Post History

60%
+1 −0
Q&A My cool character is doing nothing for the plot. How do I deal with him?

So I have this great character( not the main protagonist), who is funny and intelligent. Each scene I write for him is a delight. But the problem is, he is doing nothing for the plot. I have tried...

4 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Question plot characters
#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T02:22:44Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/5705
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar Shantnu Tiwari‭ · 2019-12-08T02:22:44Z (almost 5 years ago)
So I have this great character( not the main protagonist), who is funny and intelligent. Each scene I write for him is a delight.

But the problem is, he is doing nothing for the plot. I have tried to fit him in a few places, but he always stands out, looking uncomfortable.

I have tried reasoning with him, trying to help him out, but like a bad coin, he always turns up and accomplishes nothing. He's always like "Look at me, I'm so funny, so cute, why do I need to add to the story?"

Now I love this character, but I am stuck on what to do with him. Should I :

a. Kill him?

b. Change him?

c. Anything else??

As I said, the character isn't boring, just not that useful to the story.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2012-05-20T01:04:48Z (over 12 years ago)
Original score: 20