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Q&A My first act is lengthy. And I cannot shorten it. Any Suggestions?

Quit bean-counting. Finish the novel and then go back and worry about whether the first act works. Methods for structuring a story are guides, not laws. The novel Jonathan Strange & Mr. Norrel...

posted 12y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T02:25:45Z (almost 5 years ago)
Quit bean-counting.

Finish the novel and _then_ go back and worry about whether the first act works. Methods for structuring a story are guides, not laws. The novel _Jonathan Strange & Mr. Norrell_ is 850 pages. I remember vividly that the first six hundred were a complete slog, and then suddenly something _happened_ and the last 200-odd pages went like a shot. That worked for that book. Who knows what will work for yours?

Put the entire story together, set it aside, and then go back and look at it with fresh eyes. If your first act is the right length, stop worrying. There will be other things to fix.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2012-06-18T10:00:25Z (over 12 years ago)
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