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All your constructions are useful in different situations. Keep John Smithers's comment about cause and effect in mind, and vary your tags so that you aren't repeating the same sentence structure c...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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2019-12-13T12:00:12Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T02:29:45Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
All your constructions are useful in different situations. Keep John Smithers's comment about cause and effect in mind, and vary your tags so that you aren't repeating the same sentence structure constantly. In your examples, I like your action tags better than your dialogue tags only because they're a little tighter. There are times when you need use to "he said" or variants thereof, so don't jettison all of them.
#1: Imported from external source
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2012-08-16T16:14:01Z (about 12 years ago)
Original score: 5