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That's not a bad opening. I might change it to "Today we're going to talk about..." to make it more inclusive, but there's nothing wrong with being straightforward. Another version might be "Today ...
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2019-12-13T12:00:12Z (over 4 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T02:30:37Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
That's not a bad opening. I might change it to "Today we're going to talk about..." to make it more inclusive, but there's nothing wrong with being straightforward. Another version might be "Today I'd like to talk to you about..."
#1: Imported from external source
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2012-09-03T23:43:05Z (over 11 years ago)
Original score: 2