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And I didn't describe actions, dialogues, and settings with much detail. Should I go back and add the details before starting the second draft? I've seen your writing. The answer is yes. :) (A...
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> And I didn't describe actions, dialogues, and settings with much detail. Should I go back and add the details before starting the second draft? I've seen your writing. The answer is yes. :) (And I mean that in the nicest way. You work very hard. You do need to flesh out your dialogue with descriptions.) Go back and review these two questions of yours and my answers: [Has this dialogue enough suspense to engage the reader?](https://writers.stackexchange.com/questions/2531/has-this-dialogue-enough-suspense-to-engage-the-reader/2533#2533) [First conversation scenes I've written (looking for errors, conventions, and improvements according to writing standards)](https://writers.stackexchange.com/questions/1984/first-conversation-scenes-ive-written-looking-for-errors-conventions-and-imp)