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I really need someone to critique this poem for me. It's for a Poem Portfolio in my Creative Writing Class. I just need some help on where to include things like imagery, sensory details, similes, ...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T02:36:35Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/6768 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Emma Klein
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2019-12-08T02:36:35Z (almost 5 years ago)
I really need someone to critique this poem for me. It's for a Poem Portfolio in my Creative Writing Class. I just need some help on where to include things like imagery, sensory details, similes, metaphors, etc. I would super appreciate if anyone could help me! **Rock Collection** It's not like I ever wanted, all of these rocks. I just don't love him like I used to, and now I'm stuck with them. I wish I could get rid of them, stupid rocks. Keep me up at night, wear me down by day. These rocks are killing me. Why can't I just leave them behind? Just set them on the ground, Leave them and never come back. I just can't though, no matter how hard I try. Why can't I just love him? Love him the way I used to.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2012-12-10T23:14:04Z (almost 12 years ago)
Original score: -2