Correct word for "Pulling some one into work, with continuous effort"?
Please consider the below excerpt.
'How long is your break?' I shouted. A group of labourers sat under the banyan tree near the main campus building. 'It's two-thirty, lunch ended an hour ago'
The workers tightened their turbans. They picked up their brushes and moved to the classrooms, I remained under the banyan tree, exhausted by my daily ritual of _______ up the men every two hours.
I need some help to figure it out correct word to fill the blank among the below set of words. I am giving words along with their meanings those I have found in Oxford English Dictionary. How different word changes if I use one instead another?
haul = (of a person) pull or drag with effort or force.
Drag = pull (someone or something) along forcefully, roughly, or with difficult.
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The workers tightened their turbans. They picked up their brushes and moved to the classrooms, I remained under the banyan tree, exhausted by my daily ritual of marshalling
upthe men every two hours.
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Neither of the two words you have selected are appropriate in the context you are using them in.
Are you physically having to drag or pull the men back to work? If so, either of those words would work, but only if you are physically dragging them back to work.
You'll notice in your word meanings, both say haul a person or pull someone they can only be used if you are physically pulling a person.
In your sample text you suggest that you are verbally encouraging them back to work, ('How long is your break?' I shouted.) if that is the case then chivvy would be a better word to use -
From OED -
chivvy, v.1
To harry, harass, trouble, worry.
In use -
Doris..and I chivvied the chicken around till we caught her.
...exhausted by my daily ritual of chivvying up the men every two hours.
The word up is not strictly necessary and would work with or without it.
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1) I rather like "herding the cats." The idea is that cats are very independent and don't take well to being told what to do, and will scatter and go their own way if forced. You can herd cattle, sheep, or horses because they are group animals which naturally follow a leader and respond to goading from behind.
I remained under the banyan tree, exhausted by my daily ritual of herding the cats every two hours.
2) just use "rounding."
I remained under the banyan tree, exhausted by my daily ritual of rounding up the men every two hours.
3) Extend the cattle/sheep/horse image.
I remained under the banyan tree, exhausted by my daily ritual of rounding up the men and corralling them back to work every two hours.
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