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Q&A Should dull dialogue be removed completely?

You should watch - or maybe better read up on - Hitchcock's movies. Build up a sense of normal, dull life, then shatter it. The more standard, dull the image, the harder the blow hits, the stronger...

posted 12y ago by SF.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by user avatar SF.‭ · 2019-12-08T02:43:05Z (almost 5 years ago)
You should watch - or maybe better read up on - Hitchcock's movies. Build up a sense of normal, dull life, then shatter it. The more standard, dull the image, the harder the blow hits, the stronger the effect.

Of course don't overdo it, don't just bore the reader, but setting up the pristine stage for a disaster is an essential step. Add some good foreshadowing and make it ring now and then in the dialogue with the reader realizing but the characters oblivious to it, and you are sending cold chills down the reader's spine.

A dull dialogue may be an immensely powerful literary tool if applied correctly.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2013-02-04T15:00:50Z (almost 12 years ago)
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