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Q&A 1st person story, but the main character will die in the end and some of the story needs to be told after his death. How to solve this problem?

I see two problems. First, if the person died, how did the story come to be set down in writing? This is a problem whether the story continues after the narrator's death or not. Some readers wil...

posted 11y ago by Dale Hartley Emery‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T02:48:50Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/7620
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Dale Hartley Emery‭ · 2019-12-08T02:48:50Z (about 5 years ago)
I see two problems. First, if the person died, how did the story come to be set down in writing? This is a problem whether the story continues after the narrator's death or not. Some readers will accept this; others will not.

The second problem is the use of _only_ an epilogue. Readers often feel swindled if a new POV suddenly appears after the MC dies. This can be a problem even for single-POV third person narrations.

One way way to reduce the second problem is to add not only an epilogue, but a _frame._ Open the story from a different character's POV, then close the story from within the same frame narrator's POV.

A frame can also help with the first problem, as long as the frame narrator has some reason to know the first person story. Not just the story, but the _first person_ story. Even better is if there is some strong relationship between the two narrators.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2013-04-09T19:12:16Z (over 11 years ago)
Original score: 3