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Q&A Iambic pentameter: how do you use words with 'secondary stressed' syllables?

I'm trying to create textbook-perfect iambic pentameter. I may be wrong in my assumption of there being such a thing as a 'secondary stressed syllable', but in the word 'poetry', the rhythm of it ...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

Question poetry rhythm
#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T02:50:03Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T02:50:03Z (over 4 years ago)
I'm trying to create textbook-perfect [iambic pentameter](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iambic_pentameter).

I may be wrong in my assumption of there being such a thing as a 'secondary stressed syllable', but in the word 'poetry', the rhythm of it seems to be this: STRESSED, unstressed, secondary stressed. Right? PO-uh-Tri.

And with the word 'politician', it's: secondary stressed, unstressed, STRESSED, unstressed. Po-luh-TISH-uhn.

Since iambic pentameter is a strict unstressed/STRESSED, how can you use words like poetry and politician (and stay within the rules)?

I'll give the example that's stumping me:

Here's two variations of a line:

1. _In poetry, it's true, it can be changed,_
2. _It's true, in poetry, it can be changed,_

See how the second one doesn't sound acceptable (the 'try' in poetry just sounds wrongly placed)? But the first does? Is the first one definitely ok, or are both breaking rules?

The fact there's a difference between the two (if one right and one wrong) makes me also think: is there a conglomerate 'overall' stress pattern/arch that can apply within a line? It seems the second syllable (the first stressed syllable) can work as the PEAK stress of the phrase, after which the rest declines from that. Maybe it just depends on the sentence, and how you make it clear, using punctuation if effective, and by context of the words themselves themselves, for how it is to be read.

So if I'm right in all my judgements so far, how can I know how to use a word like 'poetry' in iambic pentameter, with its problematic little third syllable?

Thanks. :)

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2013-04-22T14:56:50Z (about 11 years ago)
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