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In other words, is it correct to write something like this: "Oh," he laughed. "Sorry, I'm not sure what's with me today." (Every time I see something like this, I think: "How is this peson la...
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System
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2019-12-08T02:55:26Z (almost 5 years ago)
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Alexandro Chen
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2019-12-08T02:55:26Z (almost 5 years ago)
In other words, is it correct to write something like this: > "Oh," he laughed. "Sorry, I'm not sure what's with me today." (Every time I see something like this, I think: "How is this peson laughing an talking at the same time? But other times seems OK for me. Strange.) as an shorter version of this? > "Oh," he said with a laugh. "Sorry, I'm not sure what's with me today." > > "Oh," he said laughing. "Sorry, I'm not sure what's with me today." Other example: > "OK," she said with a sigh. "Just this time." > > "OK," she said, sighing. "Just this time." > > "OK," she sighed. "Just this time." Because I've noticed by dialogues are cluttering with "withs" all of the sudden.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2013-06-11T13:48:58Z (over 11 years ago)
Original score: 6