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Treat details like Chekhov's Gun. They should only be there if they serve a purpose. If the purpose is to create atmosphere, explain the setting to the reader for the first time, place a macguffi...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-13T12:00:18Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T03:01:44Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T03:01:44Z (almost 5 years ago)
Treat details like Chekhov's Gun. They should only be there if they serve a purpose.

If the purpose is to create atmosphere, explain the setting to the reader for the first time, place a macguffin on a shelf (JK Rowling did this in _Order of the Phoenix_ when she casually listed a large ugly locket as one of the things in an enchanted cabinet, and it turned out to be a freakin' Horcrux in _Deathly Hallows_), or describe a character, then go right ahead.

But if you're pouring on detail to prove that you did background research, or because you have a door fetish, then save the excess to your slush file to enjoy on your own time.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2013-08-09T00:49:13Z (over 11 years ago)
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