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I am writing a romance novel. I have two main characters, Niranjan (male) and Jennifer. POV is Third Person Multiple (above two). I have a scene where they meet first time in a restaurant. While t...
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2019-12-08T03:03:52Z (over 4 years ago)
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2019-12-08T03:03:52Z (over 4 years ago)
I am writing a romance novel. I have two main characters, Niranjan (male) and Jennifer. POV is Third Person Multiple (above two). I have a scene where they meet first time in a restaurant. While the current POV is of Jennifer's and she does not know Niranjan's name. Can narrator use Niranjan's name while referring him? For Example, can I write "Jennifer walked inside the restaurant and saw Niranjan waiting for the free table" OR "Jennifer walked inside the restaurant and saw an Indian waiting for the free table" Which one is correct?
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2013-09-07T08:19:05Z (over 10 years ago)
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