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I wrote a piece of poetry for one of my short stories (the main character, Eri, writes poems). It's the following: Eri, did you feel the earthquake last night? Are you really sure your ap...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:06:32Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/9023 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Alexandro Chen
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2019-12-08T03:06:32Z (about 5 years ago)
I wrote a piece of poetry for one of my short stories (the main character, Eri, writes poems). It's the following: > **Eri,** did you feel the earthquake last night? > > Are you really sure your apartment's alright? > > In which planet where you wandering when it came? > > Is reality and the world as you know still the same? I have my doubts as to whether to put a comma after **Eri**. Seems to stop the whole flow. Or maybe that kind of punctuation is invisible in poetry?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2013-09-27T13:36:46Z (about 11 years ago)
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