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A few possibilities: Tag Nicene with an utterly distinctive physical feature. When Shadow observes that physical feature, readers will know that it is Nicene. Give Nicene some tag phrase, and hav...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:11:34Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Dale Hartley Emery
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2019-12-08T03:11:34Z (almost 5 years ago)
A few possibilities: - Tag Nicene with an utterly distinctive physical feature. When Shadow observes that physical feature, readers will know that it is Nicene. - Give Nicene some tag phrase, and have Cherry use the phrase. - Write an earlier scene in Nicene's POV, where she introduces herself to someone as Cherry. - In the scenes from Shadow's POV, introduce a character who knows Cherry as Nicene. Or maybe who vaguely remembers meeting her before, and can't remember her name, but knows it is not Cherry. - Make it clear that Cherry knows that her name is not really Cherry. That may be enough of a hint to carry the reader across the transition.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2013-11-14T00:00:55Z (almost 11 years ago)
Original score: 8