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Q&A How to list concepts and tie them in together?

The green pieces of paper folded up in your pocket, the balance in your checking account, your mortgage, and that time you paid for dinner with your friend and she said that the next time is on ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Shamoon‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T03:14:18Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/9629
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar Shamoon‭ · 2019-12-08T03:14:18Z (almost 5 years ago)
> The green pieces of paper folded up in your pocket, the balance in your checking account, your mortgage, and that time you paid for dinner with your friend and she said that the next time is on her. These are all forms of money.

That feels awkward, and Microsoft Word isn't too happy with it either. It's some fragments strewn together - but seems out of place. What's the proper way (or a better way) to handle this for a work of non-fiction?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2013-12-05T17:39:01Z (almost 11 years ago)
Original score: 2