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Make them a list of sentence fragments. Poetic license. They sound better, and it helps each thought stand distinctly.The run-on is a little exhausting to the ear. The green pieces of paper fol...
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2019-12-13T12:00:20Z (about 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T03:14:18Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
Make them a list of sentence fragments. Poetic license. They sound better, and it helps each thought stand distinctly.The run-on is a little exhausting to the ear. > The green pieces of paper folded up in your pocket. The balance in your checking account. Your mortgage. That time you paid for dinner with your friend and she said that the next time is on her. These are all forms of money.
#1: Imported from external source
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2013-12-05T18:57:23Z (about 11 years ago)
Original score: 4