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Stage business. B takes a drink. C eats something. B lounges back in his chair, looking thoughtful as he listens. C winks at the serving guy. B rolls his eyes at something the protagonist said, and...
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2019-12-13T12:00:20Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T03:15:28Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
Stage business. B takes a drink. C eats something. B lounges back in his chair, looking thoughtful as he listens. C winks at the serving guy. B rolls his eyes at something the protagonist said, and C smacks his arm to make him stop. B plays with a coin, a ring, a belt loop. C starts polishing her knives. Imagine that you're watching the scene in a movie. The other two are still there, still moving and reacting and doing stuff. Write that down.
#1: Imported from external source
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2013-12-18T02:04:01Z (almost 11 years ago)
Original score: 6