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Then he said to her: "I told you I won't do that!” In an undertone, he added, “And I think you shouldn’t either.” Unfortunately, I think that’s the best you can do. I’ve hardly ever seen paren...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:16:25Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/9813 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Seth Gordon
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2019-12-08T03:16:25Z (over 4 years ago)
> Then he said to her: "I told you I won't do that!” In an undertone, he added, “And I think you shouldn’t either.” Unfortunately, I think that’s the best you can do. I’ve hardly ever seen parentheses used as punctuation within dialogue, so if I saw it now, I would have no idea how to interpret them.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2013-12-26T15:26:35Z (over 10 years ago)
Original score: 13