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Q&A How to highlight a main character among several points of view?

Everything is about him. The other characters talk about him, plot about him, worry about him, try to contact him. Everything is about what he's doing or where he's going and with whom. Scenes wh...

posted 11y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-13T12:00:21Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/9993
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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T03:18:24Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/9993
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T03:18:24Z (about 5 years ago)
Everything is _about_ him.

The other characters talk about him, plot about him, worry about him, try to contact him. Everything is about what he's doing or where he's going and with whom. Scenes where he isn't there detail the effect his actions or words had on the other characters.

If it's his story, then tell his story. The TV show _Person of Interest_ is primarily about Mr. Finch and Mr. Reese. The other characters have lives and families, but we don't see those lives and families every episode. We primarily see them working with the two main characters, doing work for them, protecting them, talking to them, carrying out orders, etc.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2014-01-10T21:23:18Z (almost 11 years ago)
Original score: 7