Post History
My cousin is giving birth to twins, and I am preparing the invitation cards. I wrote Twice as much love Two blessings from above Anthony a lovely boy And Joya brings the joy The glorified deliv...
#3: Attribution notice added
by
System
·
2019-12-08T03:18:28Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/9997 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
by
Lynob
·
2019-12-08T03:18:28Z (over 4 years ago)
My cousin is giving birth to twins, and I am preparing the invitation cards.
I wrote
Twice as much love
Two blessings from above
Anthony a lovely boy
And Joya brings the joy
The glorified delivery
Is on the 17th of January
May their lives be filled with Love and laughter
And may God bless them with happiness forever
Obviously, I have to use certain keywords, like delivery and January, can the term glorified delivery be used to describe giving birth, is there a better term?
And is it "Okay" that the last 2 sentences are longer than the others?
#1: Imported from external source
by
System
·
2014-01-11T10:22:34Z (over 10 years ago)
Original score: 2