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I think it's the "tongues" which caught everyone's eye. That faux high English hearkens back to Tolkien's diction, which makes people recall his version. Change it up. Rearrange the order and add ...
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2019-12-13T12:00:21Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T03:19:59Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/10107 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
I think it's the "tongues" which caught everyone's eye. That faux high English hearkens back to Tolkien's diction, which makes people recall his version. Change it up. Rearrange the order and add a little hyperbole: > In all the dialects of all the languages of all the cultures of men, elves, dwarves, trolls, goblins, or beasts, there are not enough words to describe how disgusting...
#1: Imported from external source
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2014-01-23T02:48:38Z (almost 11 years ago)
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