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You have to identify them somehow. Use adjectives. The tall man vs. the short man The older man vs. the younger man The long-haired man vs. the man with the thistle-down hair The carpenter vs. th...
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2019-12-08T03:21:18Z (almost 5 years ago)
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You have to identify them somehow. Use adjectives. - The tall man vs. the short man - The older man vs. the younger man - The long-haired man vs. the man with the thistle-down hair - The carpenter vs. the electrician - The French man vs. the German man It may get repetitive to say "her hands rested on the carpenter's shoulders, just they way they rested on the electrician's when she were tired after talking a walk," but that's pretty much what you're stuck with.
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2014-01-31T10:43:13Z (almost 11 years ago)
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