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The only one which actually seems repetitious is the third one; the first one is perfect and the second is a deliberate sentence-fragment echo. I literally didn't notice them. for the third: O...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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2019-12-13T12:00:21Z (about 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T03:22:17Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
The only one which actually seems repetitious is the third one; the first one is perfect and the second is a deliberate sentence-fragment echo. I literally didn't notice them. for the third: > Or even worse, we end up doing something that may hurt us — or those around us.
#1: Imported from external source
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2014-02-08T14:21:14Z (almost 11 years ago)
Original score: 1