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If you really feel the need to have whatever noise she makes expressed as dialogue, I would write it as "Hic!" However, I personally would either write it as Hic! to indicate it's more of a sound...
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If you really feel the need to have whatever noise she makes expressed as dialogue, I would write it as "Hic!" However, I personally would either write it as _Hic!_ to indicate it's more of a sound than speech, or just relate it narratively: > Jane hiccuped loudly, startling even herself. She tried not to look embarrassed.