Activity for James Waldby - jwpat7
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Edit | Post #7999 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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A: Is the following allowed under the ungrammatical exceptions in fiction? I prefer the first of the two examples; the second seems choppy. It would read slightly better with “Red coals” in place of “The red coal”. (That is, coal should be plural in both examples, and there should be no article before it.) I might or might not add with or its to the first: > Under the shel... (more) |
— | over 11 years ago |