Activity for Peretzâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #4849 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #4742 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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How to further improve the flow and crispness in the essay? I am writing an essay in which I used a simple chronological flow. Setting first the background, then the circumstances I was involved in and the decision I took, and finally my conclusion after the experience. I reviewed it several times, but since the story is in my mind. I might be skipping detai... (more) |
— | almost 13 years ago |
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Does this essay demonstrate flow, clarity, and passion? I am applying to school and, after 3-4 weeks of thinking and writing essay iterations, I ended up with the essay below. > What are your professional objectives? (300 words) > > I have one professional objective: Push forward the personal robotics market. > > Over the last few decades, robotics... (more) |
— | almost 13 years ago |