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Posts by storbror‭

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Q&A How can I accurately represent young adult dialogue?

Although these are useful suggestions and answers, I believe @MarkBaker's answer is key. I'm 26 with 3 younger siblings (very much in touch with my childish side) and I believe that there are 4 imp...

posted 7y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Software to organise world building?

Evernote I personally have 2 (free) accounts on Evernote, that share almost all notes, meaning I can use them on all my devices. There are online and downloaded versions of the notes application f...

posted 4y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I turn a premise into a story?

This scenario seems to be character-based to me. You may not yet have developed your characters "fully", but that could come through actual writing and a bit of outlining. It seems that you have ...

posted 7y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to come up with original ideas for stories?

To begin with; This is an expansion of @DPT's answer to this question. A dialogue between two fleshed-out (or quickly sketched-out) characters can possibly develop into something "bigger" by havi...

posted 6y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Why sometimes we read "automatically" ?

I have no expert knowledge in this field, but I have a theory. This may be caused by 'your' personal experiences and how the context/content/atmosphere/vibe/word choice might remind you of certai...

posted 6y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to Paraphrase a narration which is written by a first person perspective

If rewording is indeed what's needed, then @NofP gives a good answer. However, what I take from your question, and the request from the teacher, is that maybe it's about the way you tell the read...

posted 6y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is there a dialog tag for when someone is saying something in awe?

I agree with @MarkBaker, that, in this case, there aren't many ways to express the line your character says. However, you could try to show something about the character that matches his/her beha...

posted 6y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Hint to murder in a dramatic monologue?

I am not experienced with 'Dramatic Monolouges', but this question is similar to many others where the writer doesn't want to give "an obvious answer/fact" to the reader. @Rasadashan gives some g...

posted 5y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Rapid change in character

Always try, at least for yourself, to give motivations to any character for behaving a certain way. Why is A the way he is? Should the reader know this? Here are some ideas for making a change,...

posted 4y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A What techniques authors use to keep track of their cast?

I would have a document like the one @Galastel suggests, which makes good sense for 'characterizing your characters', but I also keep a 'mindmap' with a visual representation of how all my characte...

posted 4y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Awkward language translation

I personally wouldn't find it unrealistic that people in any country today mocked somebody for the way their name sounds in English. I'd say keep it. I'm aware that not all countries have a capac...

posted 4y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I know who's my protagonist? EARLY in writing process (maybe complicated, maybe not)

This is my first actual question, so I apologize in advance if I include something that is not suited for the forum, or if this is a duplicate of an existing west - though I DID try to find one tha...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Writing differently when following different character POVs - mainly age difference. (3rd Person)

I'm writing a sci-fi novel with more than one main character. Since I'm not an experienced writer, I still struggle with some basic "rules" within writing that may or may not exist. This issue ...

4 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Working with hints/clues - Show vs Tell vs Nothing -ish

This is about the hints that the readers should notice as the story progresses - and should definitely notice upon re-read. First off, I looked around for a bit and didn't see any questions on th...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by storbror‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭