Activity for Sophie K‭

Type	On...	Excerpt	Status	Date
Edit	Post #5924	Initial revision	—	almost 5 years ago
Answer	—	A: Is this dialogue and situation intriguing (short story)? This is really amazing and eerie start for a story!! I was very intrigued throughout. I like the dialogue for the most part, but to make the woman appear even more mysterious, I would recommend she not seem so eager to share these thoughts with Julian, and make him inquire a bit more. One other thing... (more)	—	about 12 years ago