Angel‭

Like how do I describe if someone is doing symbols with their hands like this? I want to describe specific hand formation but that seems like it’ll be a whole paragraph just for one second of sayin...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

What I’m trying to say is the first four chapters are about four different people by themselves, then they’re together the rest of the book and all die except one, but that one is very important an...

7 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

Will I get sued or something if I just mention/ reference something like that?

0 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

What I’m doing is making a story in the medieval times and I wanted to make up a village and have my characters be there and travel around there but do I have to make everything around there in the...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

I started a book and although I wanted it to be dark, will the readers find it too dark if the characters almost never win? Or are a lot of readers into that? In my book the two main characters' wh...

5 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

I’ve seen it done in Harry Potter I just don’t understand when its okay to do it, like can I say something like “John walked away from the house and was now walking along the road” or not? When is ...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

Well in the book IT they switch from different point of view and different time periods a lot but how Stephen King does it is he does this thing where he numbers sections in the chapter, I’m explai...

posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

My story is about two children and one of them dies in the first chapter. I give a four page backstory of how his parents came to the town they are in now, it is unnecessary but very interesting....

3 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

I’m writing a book and these first 20 pages are mostly just action so my question is if a book is like mad max fury road, (almost nothing but action) will it be annoying or not be exciting anymore ...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

Every time a character is thinking something is it necessary to put “_____thought,” if there is italics, so shouldnt they already know that’s what the character was thinking not the narrator speaki...

4 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

I mean are the most famous authors usually trade-published or are there some self-published others that are very well known?

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

I feel like I have everything except the first chapter; once the story is underway I feel like I know where to go, but I'd like some guidance in getting it all started when the reader knows nothing...

3 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭

This is a random example but would it be bad if I said something like this when the book is set in a historical setting: “Edwards sword was black and shiny like a brand new car” is it not ok? Shoul...

5 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 7y ago by System‭