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Edit Post #6884 Initial revision about 5 years ago
Answer A: Very long sentences: personal style or just bad writing?
I think it largely depends on what kind of "children's book" we're talking about. If this is a book for teenagers (or even "tweenagers"), then it is an excellent way to convey a feeling of restlessness or stress. If we're talking about younger audiences, it might be dangerous simply because the sente...
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