Activity for Cmillz
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #6884 | Initial revision | — | almost 7 years ago |
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A: Very long sentences: personal style or just bad writing? I think it largely depends on what kind of "children's book" we're talking about. If this is a book for teenagers (or even "tweenagers"), then it is an excellent way to convey a feeling of restlessness or stress. If we're talking about younger audiences, it might be dangerous simply because the s... (more) |
— | over 13 years ago |