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Posts by Jay‭

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Q&A Spiritual elements in a science-fiction novel

That's a question of definitions that one could debate endlessly. Definitions are invented by people, often indirectly by simply using words with a certain meaning in mind without necessarily spell...

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Q&A Do we simplify descriptions when they sound weird?

My first thought on reading your question is a tangent: I find it distracting that you use the word "small" twice in such a short space. Is it important that the coin and/or the wallet is small? If...

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Q&A Detail vs. filler

I think the textbook answer is: Does the detail contribute to the story? If you describe how a character's house is filled with guns and bombs, that tells us something very different about him than...

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Q&A How to deal appropriately with an inappropriate sexual relationship

First, I'd check on the law where you live. Writing about a child engaging in sex might legally be considered child pornography. I write non-fiction so I've never personally had to deal with this...

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Q&A Where's the balance between realism and story?

Your question starts out asking about plot holes but then you appear to shift to asking about humor and parody. Those are not at all the same thing. I suppose you could describe both as "the story ...

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Q&A Is page range inclusive or exclusive?

Page ranges are normally inclusive. "Pages 1-5" means pages 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5. I think most readers would be extremely confused if you wrote "pages 1-5" and mean 1, 2, 3, and 4. Note that you sho...

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Q&A Do I really need a platform to sell my novel?

Do you HAVE to? Of course not. But how many copies are you expecting or hoping to sell? I've self-published 4 books. All non-fiction, which I think is rather a different market from fiction, but w...

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Q&A Is there such a thing as too inconvenient?

I read an article by a writer once in which he said that he spent a great deal of his time putting doors in alleys. And he explained that what he meant was, if he has a scene where the hero is bein...

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Q&A A torrent of foreign terms

This is the same problem that experts always have when trying to explain their field to the general public. My advice is: don't be such a purist. I develop software for a living. Computer systems...

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Q&A The seven story archetypes. Are they truly all of them?

Most attempts at classifying things like this are completely arbitrary. Different writers will come up with different lists, and it's not like you could somehow prove that one is right and the othe...

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Q&A Is straight-up writing someone's opinions telling?

As you say yourself, "show don't tell" is a guideline and not an absolute rule. I write computer software for a living. (Sadly, I make way too little money writing to live on.) I've had many occa...

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Q&A Is it bad to describe a character long after their introduction?

As Secespitus says -- and I upvoted his answer -- if you delay describing a character, then the reader forms a mental image, and then later you break it and it's very disconcerting. The reader now ...

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Q&A Is it advisable to begin marketing a book before it is published?

I haven't seen the presentation you describe and it's not clear to me what sort of marketing it calls for. You mention giving out a free sample. Like a sample chapter or something? I see two big ca...

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Q&A How can I make names more distinctive without making them longer?

Direct answer: Some consonants in English sound similar. They tend to fall in groups: b, d, p, t, th, v c, ch, g, j, k, q, s, sh, x, z f, p h l m, n r w ...

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Q&A Writing about oneself objectively

This is a big subject that probably can't be answered in a brief post, but some thoughts that come to mind: Give objective facts, not subjective evaluations. For example, "I was valedictorian", ...

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Q&A Writing in a Christian voice

I'm a white Baptist who is married to a black Baptist, so if you have specific questions about the sort of things we say and do, maybe I can help. :-) What you describe is an example of a problem ...

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Q&A Using words from another book

There are two issues here: plagiarism and copyright. Plagiarism is when you copy from another writer (or composer or whatever, but we're talking about writing here) without giving proper credit. I...

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Q&A Is It Legal to Use Military Insignias of Defunct Nations?

Under US copyright law, anything created by the US government is not protected by copyright. It is automatically public domain. (There are some complexities to this that we could get into but they'...

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Q&A How does one write from a minority culture? A question on cultural references

Sure. There are two possibilities. Oh, you used religion as the example so let's continue with that example. Similar things would apply to an ethnic heritage, or for that matter to the subculture ...

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Q&A Is it ok to have many characters who only appear for a few chapters?

I hate to give the old standby answer, "it all depends ..." But, it all depends. Of course in most stories there are characters who appear briefly to perform some specific function and then disapp...

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Q&A When writing in a school context without ever having been to school, how do I make sure that my story is accurate within school context?

This is a classic problem for writers. I once heard a lecture by Isaac Asimov, a well-known science fiction writer, where he said that his first attempt at writing fiction was set in a small town, ...

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Q&A How to secure my written work from being stolen or copied before publishing?

As Darkocean noted, the instant you write your story, it is protected by copyright law. "Is there any official body who can control any type of theft or plagiarism of written content?" Yes. In the...

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Q&A Dead children in pre-modern setting

Is child mortality relevant to your story? If not, then I just wouldn't bring it up. There are all sorts of tragedies in the world. I don't consider a story unrealistic because it failed to discuss...

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Q&A Do hard to pronounce names break immersion?

Yes, I find it distracting. To me, the problem is not so much if a name is hard to pronounce, but if it's difficult to figure out how it's supposed to be pronounced. Unless the spelling of a name...

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Q&A Not having any white MC's?

Speaking as a white person, I can't imagine that I would be offended that a story contained no white characters. Depending on the setting, it might or might not seem odd. I mean, if the story is se...

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