Activity for Ariel Vardy
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #8059 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
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Is this stylized writing successful or gimmicky? This is a 3000-word piece, with deliberately stylized writing. Is the style of this piece successful or gimmicky? Does it read smooth or choppy? > He sat on top of the highway. City on a hill. He was looking down at the cars, but not at their metal chassis. He was concerned with their existence, and... (more) |
— | over 11 years ago |