Activity for AnthonyRusso
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Edit | Post #8231 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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A: Swearing - Censor, allude, or include? In my current story, a character just came into a room and saw our protagonist standing among a room full of dead bodies. In utter shock and fear (as he had no expectation of this) he proclaimed "What the fuck did you do?" I don't think without the included profanity, the scene works. He hardly is a... (more) |
— | over 11 years ago |