Activity for Austin Burk‭

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Edit	Post #9249	Initial revision	—	over 4 years ago
Question	—	Where should I put a minor action within a piece of dialogue? Which is more appropriate: > The air carried a bitter chill, but was clear and unpolluted. > > “Oh wow,” I said. “I know how Black Friday has a reputation for crowds, but this takes it to a new level!” > > “That’s why we don’t usually go shopping on Black Friday, honey,” my mother replied, squeezi... (more)	—	over 10 years ago