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Posts by Ash‭

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Q&A How do you show, through your narration, a hard and uncaring world?

Some elements that can be clearly seen and described occur to me: Graffiti is common where people feel disenfranchised, it seems to form an outlet for people who feel they don't have a voice. Di...

posted 5y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Should I write my book in first person's POV or third person's POV?

Yes and then again no, there is no one answer to this question, write using whatever perspective gets your point across. Usually it's a good idea to pick a perspective and stick with it throughout ...

posted 6y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I know when and if a character requires a backstory?

Ultimately audiences don't need a lot of details about most characters' history, what they do need, in order for the story to make sense and be immersive, is justifications for their actions. If a ...

posted 5y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Storyboarding Approaches for the Non-Artistic

First thing I just have to address "I have a great idea too long for a short story" you do realise there are lengths that fall between a typical short story and a full blown novel right? I'm a fan ...

posted 5y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Has anyone ever written a novel or short story composed of only dialogue?

It's been done a fair few time, I've written a short story this way myself, over two decades ago mind you. It can be done, my recollection is that it came out pretty stilted but I was only 12 so it...

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Q&A How do I write a compelling villain-all-along twist?

You have to make the character into a real person who the audience believe certain things about. In particular that the sidekick is loyal to the protagonist not the or some set of ideals but the pe...

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Q&A What's a moment that's more impactful on a reread called?

I've met a few of these but the most recent instance was two characters discussing buying a third character a drink when they all got home, on the first reading this is a simple moment of comradery...

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Q&A How can one write good dialogue in a story without sounding wooden?

There isn't one, fiction, both reading it and writing it is a subjective experience, everyone sees it differently so there's no single formula that works in all cases. The best way to learn good wr...

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Q&A What's it called when the bad guy gets eaten?

Is there a specific name for the plot device in which the story's "Big Bad" has a cunning plan to use some monstrous being to further their diabolical machinations. This may be something summoned f...

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Q&A Are there advantages in writing by hand over typing out a story?

Please note that I used to hand write everything and only type up what I felt was worthwhile later, largely due to a rather slow typing speed. Now I tend to do one or the other, typing some project...

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Q&A How do I tell the reader that my character is autistic in Fantasy?

You'd need to highlight the challenges you think most typify the autistic experience. I'm an aspy my main personal challenge is reading body language, I have other issues but that's the one that ha...

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Q&A I have a dialogue that I can't write directly. What would be a good alternative?

Tell your audience that the sparrows are cheeping and use italics for the translation. This is a technique that I've seen in a few books for communication that isn't verbal/audible the italics carr...

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Q&A Are there any established rules for splitting books into parts, chapters, sections etc?

Short answer: break where it makes sense. Some points at which breaks are traditionally made or ways to define breaks include: change of site, the place the action is taking place changes. chang...

posted 5y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is writing in fragments bad practice?

No-one can answer that for you but you, do you find that the end result justifies the practice? I can't write in fragments because they either A. don't fit when I come to stitch the whole together,...

posted 7y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How should a big universe be introduced without being boring?

Explain what needs to be explained as it becomes relevant rather than trying to present all the information in one go. This has certain advantages: it avoids dumping all the information on the au...

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Q&A How to avoid mentioning the name of a character?

Sure, take the example of the Library story arc in Doctor Who, we see River Song tell the Doctor his name by way of convincing him she's trustworthy but we don't hear it. The audience only know wha...

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Q&A When should a supporting character be scrapped?

A character need not have any impact on the plot, in terms of making things happen, to be an active player in the narrative as a whole. Take S.M. Stirling's Odard Liu; he spends three books as a mi...

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Q&A How can I avoid a predictable plot?

Characters should view the narrative from the present, a good way to keep the reader in the dark about the future of the story is to present a first person narrative and have the reader only know w...

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Q&A What kind of writing style works for a game?

Here's some thoughts, I tried to write something cohesive but no dice today. If you have multiple storylines told from the perspective of different characters then you have two options: tell se...

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Q&A Changing perspectives

It depends to what degree you change perspective, if you're switching from one first person narrative to another you can do this smoothly enough. Switching from first person to third can be, and of...

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Q&A Is it okay to use a lot of exclamation marks?

I've been told, by professional teachers of creative writing no less, that the correct number of exclamation marks to use in any finished piece of writing is zero; I've also read the works of Terry...

posted 6y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How can I indicate that a particular relationship between two male characters is purely brotherly (Philia) rather than romantic (Eros)?

The same way you can point out the same relationship between any pairing people think/assume are romantically involved, show how funny and/or gross they find the idea that they could ever be more t...

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Q&A How does an author write in hand gestures and non-verbal communication?

The nicest way I've ever seen of pointing out hand gestures and body language in a narrative without disrupting it was to not specify what the hand gestures/body language are/is but simply to note ...

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Q&A Misdirection for suspense/plot twists - what's acceptable and what's dishonest?

The problem I always have with this question, and any other question that asks, directly or indirectly, about our readers' knowledge is that no two people ever come at a story from exactly the same...

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Q&A How do I design characters for an open-ended series?

Don't write characters, find characters. I'm a strong believer that open-ended stories should exist in open worlds. Rather than telling a unique and pivotal tale of daring-do they tell the story o...

posted 6y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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