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| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Edit | Post #10797 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Question | — |
Suggestions for revising style and cadence within a children's book When I submitted a manuscript for a children's book to a publisher, they expressed an interest but wanted me to improve the style and cadence: > The syntax and cadence would possibly work well in an oral retelling of the story, but on paper, they seem to be awkward and stilted in parts. The narrativ... (more) |
— | over 10 years ago |