Activity for Tim B
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #35346 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #34510 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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A: Does detail obscure or enhance action? Assuming she survives (or in some cases even if she doesn't depending on how the story is structured) don't forget that you can always do the short version (which I agree with the others would most likely work better for an action scene) but then weave the other details in retrospectively. For examp... (more) |
— | over 5 years ago |
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A: Is a lawful good "antagonist" effective? Two Lawful Good people can still end up violently opposed, they just need to have different views of reality, laws or good. The classic scenario would be two soldiers who are both good, kind and thoughtful people but happen to be on opposite sides of a war. They can resent and hate each other becaus... (more) |
— | over 5 years ago |