Activity for Robert Grantâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #11187 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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A: When mentioning two items in a sentence, should I specify which one I'm referring to in the next one? I think you'd do better moving the mention of hair to the second sentence: > She had green eyes. Her hair curled like ferns clustered in a mountain forest. Or one sentence: > She had green eyes and her hair curled like ferns clustered in a mountain forest. Having said that, I'm not really able to... (more) |
— | about 10 years ago |