Activity for user3395203
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #12646 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
| Question | — |
My story moves too fast I finally sat down and wrote the first chapter of my planned novel. Reading back through it, I realized that there is so much that happens in only 2000 words. People die, the protagonist is captured, dialogue happens, but it all happens so fast, one event after another. How do I write in a more expan... (more) |
— | about 9 years ago |