Activity for user1316538
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #12946 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
| Edit | Post #12806 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
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Should I use ellipses in narration? I want to indicate a dramatic pause in the narration of my fiction, but the rules I've read say that ellipses are reserved for "" quoted dialog. This would be the example I'm looking at: > Normally he could tolerate it by spending his day in the far reaches of the forest or hiding in his office tha... (more) |
— | about 9 years ago |
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Stutter that changes words mid sentence I wanted to have someone correct themselves mid-sentence, and I remembered some guides I read on the subject. They only seemed to allow only the most basic of stutters, but I want one where someone starts saying one word, then switches to another as they're saying it. > Feitla took a kneeling positi... (more) |
— | about 9 years ago |