Activity for Joel Okimoto
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #17210 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #15378 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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How to write a religious experience? I'm currently writing a story with a strong theme of spirituality and divinity. At around the halfway point my protagonist has a religious experience which changes them. This experience is a highly important and pivotal to the make-up of the story. The story is from the first-person perspective of t... (more) |
— | over 8 years ago |
| Question | — |
Should I describe my characters going to the toilet? Should I let the narrator (third person) describe that my characters are going to the bathroom (for a sense of realism and accuracy) or should I simply omit it as it as it adds no value to the storyline? I can imagine reading about characters going to the bathroom can get annoying for an audience, bu... (more) |
— | almost 9 years ago |