Activity for DLHâ
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #21490 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #21408 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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A: Is stating the feeling in the action that describes it a sign of bad writing? The words relief and amused might or might not be helpful, depending on what context is available at the time. If the "sigh of relief" line is the first line in a scene, then the phrase of relief is a useful, efficient way to distinguish a sigh of relief from a despondent sigh or an annoyed sigh. Wi... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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A: How to work in a piece of information that no MC knows, when writing in 3PLtd? My first thought would be to add someone who farms these special vegetables as a character in a subplot, giving you all sorts of ways to work in the key information. You would still have to break the flow of the main storyline occasionally for these interludes, but the reader would readily forgive yo... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |