Activity for Loupax
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| Edit | Post #18713 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
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How do I keep a major emotional upheaval from seeming artificial and abrupt? I'm writing a short story. In it, someone hires a professional assassin to kill a young woman. While the killer is investigating his target he unknowingly starts having feelings for her but he only realizes it after he pulls the trigger. What I want to do is describe the descent of the main characte... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |