Activity for paul robisonâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #21396 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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re-writing a paragraph to make it more appealing How best can I re-write this paragraph to make it more family friendly? There had been a time, barely a month or two ago, when he had sat his face to the storm and grinned with glee as the wind and sea-spray hurled themselves against his weather-beaten countenance. Yet now the warm, jasmine-scented ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |