Activity for Llongo
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Edit | Post #22848 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #21856 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
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Are lit consultancies just out for money or can I trust them? I am at the stage where I have edited my novel to the best of my ability. I want a manuscript assessment and have sent off samples of my writing to a few lit consultancies, and have received very kind feedback, too kind in fact. I am wondering if they are seeing pound signs instead of a nervous write... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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"Am I mixing my tenses?" She asked, scratching her head I'm very confused about tenses. I am not sure if I am mixing modifiers up or slipping from past to present. Can someone help me please, here are a few examples: Stooping, he lit a fire, warming himself as he swigged from a bottle. He flexed his fingers above the flames, glancing at her uneasy expre... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |