Activity for Prahara‭

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Comment	Post #276340	I tried several other versions in my testing chapter. And I think this is beyond my skill for now. I just cannot get it right. I decided to simply mention it few times, when he meets somebody new, that he is hard to understand. Mostly I rely on his noticeable different behavior like bow instead of ha... (more)	—	almost 4 years ago
Comment	Post #276241	I think you hit the nail. I did the change too fast and with neglected foreshadowing. I am really inclining to what one of the reader suggested and do redemption arc, returning the character to "good-side" but more matured as a result of her transformation and pretend the redemption was all planned h... (more)	—	almost 4 years ago
Comment	Post #276172	When you get the answer it always feel so obvious - I think it is just matter of practicing to do proper set up without forcing it into places where it does not belong for sake of having it. As always Mark, thank you. You are excellent source of knowledge (more)	—	almost 4 years ago
Comment	Post #276129	I decided to combine both ideas here... First I will go for natural rebellion to "annoy parents" which brings this character into circle of absinthe sipping avantgarde friends, which will makes him later adopt these ideas as his genuine agenda. (more)	—	almost 4 years ago
Comment	Post #276127	Also: Wow! I have double major from modern history and literature! That is awesome to see that experience writer like you did same studies as I did!! (more)	—	almost 4 years ago
Comment	Post #276127	Thank you very much for explaining that it is completely fine to have fully conscious teenagers and perfect "lens, not a window" portrait. I would just like to add, that severing ties with their business, when entering gentry, to clean the taint of trade were not expected from landed gentry during... (more)	—	almost 4 years ago
Comment	Post #276121	nope, love it. Thanks (more)	—	almost 4 years ago