Activity for eyeballfrogâ€
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| Edit | Post #32764 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #32500 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #32486 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
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A: How to explain the main plot with science based concepts, without the non-sci-fi fans getting bored? Since this is a game, you can have your cake and eat it too: put the detailed explanations in sidequests or optional logs. The main plot presented to the player doesn't need to include anything but the basic rules of how the aliens are scary and evil. The side material can go into more detail about t... (more) |
— | almost 6 years ago |
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A: Is my story "too diverse"? I don't think it's alienating, but it does press my suspension of disbelief a bit to have such a large fraction of the cast be LGBT characters. Gays are something like 3-5% of the population, with the rest of the letters being an even smaller fraction. Having a group of four LGBT characters with no h... (more) |
— | almost 6 years ago |
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A: Should I change from past to present tense to state a fact that continues into the present and is unyielding? I think this is more of a stylistic choice. Personally I disagree with Galastel and would keep consistency of tense. The switch to present seems like the narrator is suddenly giving me a lecture rather than explaining a scene. If you think this passage > This was due to the fact that, like Earth's m... (more) |
— | almost 6 years ago |